Nasa, Credible due to the fact that they are a government run, non profit organization that has been sending astronauts into space for decades. Space exploration has exponentially increased people's utility, innovation in sciences, industrial applications in addition to intangible advancements in philosophy, academics and international relations. Therefore the citizens of earth should further develop space programs, academics and push towards a true space frontier with access to all.
The most critical and certain benefits of space exploration include knowledge, and technological knowledge. There is a enormous amount of effort and critical thinking put into a misoon, therefore technological applications and advancement are rapidly expanding. When you compound the knowledge gained over many missions we as humans begin to appreciate the rarity of life, Mankind's accomplishments and future.
Innovation in key Science, Technology, Engineering and Mathematic (STEM) fields have rapidly expanded and can be linked directly back to the beginning of space exploration. The apollo missions influenced a 89% increase in international scientists in STEM fields according to NASA. NASA also proclaimed some of the many inventions derived from space research. “The wider list of technological benefits encompasses improved solar panels, implantable heart monitors, light‐based anti‐cancer therapy, cordless tools, light‐ weight high‐temperature alloys used in jet engine turbines, cameras found in today's cell phones, compact water‐ purification systems, global search‐and‐rescue systems and biomedical technologies”(NASA). Between the advancements in technology, physics, human psychology and other planetary evolution society has been greatly and deeply impacted positively.
I like your hook because it got me interested in the topic,I also like how you used a reliable source like NASA to quote. I think to improve for the next blog post you should use evidence in both paragraphs, and you should also check for grammar and structural mistakes before posting.
ReplyDeleteI lived how you used NASA to support your claim, I think that was really good. I liked how you embedded quotes into your sentences, it really helped. I would use more quotes and evidence in the first paragraph, because you have a lot in your second paragraph. I just feel like it would sound better. I would also check spelling for words and a bit of grammar, but overall it was good. I really liked your hook and I think your topic is very interesting.
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